TNT'S Freelance Writing

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By TaraT

A Terrible Tragedy

 

MOMMY, I'M YOUR SUGAR IN YOUR TEA, THE LIGHT IN EVERY DAY. SO WIPE ALL THOSE WORRIES AND TEARS AWAY. JUST FOR A MOMENT IN TIME, IM HERE TO CALM YOUR MIND.. SO JUST THINK OF ME AND I WILL BE ..EVEN THOUGH I MAY NOT BE INFRONT OF THEE, I WILL BE WITH YOU IN SPRIT AND MIND.I KNOW I WAS A BABY TO YOUNG TO LEAVE;   MOMMY  DON'T BE SAD..I'M FREE FROM THIS WORLD  THAT SURE WOULD HAVE DAMAGED ME...I WILL BE BACK ANOTHER TIME AND LIVE MY LIFE THAT WAS TAKEN FROM ME.WITH YOU BY MY SIDE. I WHAT YOU TO KNOW THAT YOU WHERE THE BEST MOMMY TO ME.SO STAY STRONG LIKE YOU WAS WITH ME..I WHAT YOU TO BE FREE..YOU NEED TO BE STRONG IN SPRIT AND MIND FOR ARE LITTLE GABRIAL!!  REMEMBER AS HE GROWS I GROW WITH HIM. SO LOOK FOR ME.. HE WILL MAKE THE SAME MISTAKES AS ME..BUT KNOW I'LL BE THERE TO GUIDE HIM ..WE WILL ALL BE TOGETHER IN ANOTHER TIME!! MOMMY                                                                                             REMEMBER WE ARE THE SUGAR IN YOUR TEA,THE  LIGHT IN EVERY DAY.WIPE AWAY ALL YOUR WORRIES AND FEARS AWAY, AND  LOOK AT HIM, AND SMIILE FOR ME!!   I WROTE THIS FOR A CLOSE FRIEND WHO LOST HER SON  2 MONTHS AGO. HE WAS WAY TO YOUNG..SHE WROTE A POEM TO HIM.. SO I WRITE ONE FOR HER FROM HIM . THIS WAS A PIECE THAT I WROTE FOR MY BOYS FOR WHEN I'M GONE. BUT I ALTERED IT  FOR HER. THEN I ACIDENTALLY DELETED THE FRIST DRAFT OF THIS. SO THIS ONE IS NOT AS GOOD AS THE FIRST. BUT I HOPE THAT IT DOES HELP CALM YOUR MIND. EVEN IF IT'S JUST A LITTLE BIT .KNOW THAT I LOVE YOU AND ALL YOU GOT TO DO IS CALL ME. AND I'LL BE THERE FOR YOU.

Sugar in your Tea

 My baby boy's don't you cry no more. Mommy's here to calm your tears and wipe away all your worries and fears.

 Mommy's here just like your sugar in your tea,Your light in every day. When your grown and gone don't you dare forget that mommy is here to calm your tears and wipe away all your worries and fears. Just think of me and I will be.

My baby boy's don't you ever forget that mom loves you threw thick and thin. No matter what you do. Just remember that I am here always in mind and spirit to wipe away all your worries and fears.

When I'm dead and gone cry all you want, But later on my baby boys don't you dare forget. Mom will always be around to calm your tears and wipe away all your worries and frowns.

My baby boy's I'm your sugar in your tea, and your light in every day. So wipe away all those worries and fears; just for one moment in time. Remember I'm here in spirit and mind to calm your tears, and love you for all TIME!!!

 

 

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TaraT Hub Author 3 years ago

Hi everyone. please give me some time to get my hub up and running.thank you for your visting my site.

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hsofyan 3 years ago

I difficult to translate any posts if all the capital letters. Best regards.

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TaraT Hub Author 3 years ago

I'm new at this so if anyone else has any tips for me plz. tell. Thank you.

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TaraT Hub Author 3 years ago

Thank you. but I know.plz. no more tips about everything in capital!! I put this up for every one to enjoy. It is very personal so it was met to be in all capitals.

Uncle Dave 3 years ago

Don't worry to much about people complaining about youruse of all Capitol letters in that piece sweetie. For some reason no mater where they are used be it an e-mail or on a web-page, cyber-surfers seem to think a person is shouting if they use all Capitols. That comes from hanging out in chat rooms and it is considered improper etiquette to use all Capitols when chatting in those rooms so unless you are using chat rooms I would not worry about it... You will learn that some people on the net just can't help but criticize others no matter what the other person does so just don't sweat it, if they don't like the way you use letters, they don't have to read your writing...

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TaraT Hub Author 3 years ago

So very true!!

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Lgali 3 years ago

nice hub

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